punctuation

you are punctuation

in my day

your departures commas fullstops

(for chili)

2 thoughts on “punctuation”

SandyCarlson says:

November 13, 2009 at 12:22 am

Punctuation determines the fragments, the fused sentences, the mere phrases. Beautiful metaphor here.

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lissa says:

November 17, 2009 at 4:38 pm

I like it, it commands action in very few words

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