a woman knits
flowers
on a soldier’s grave
(ku submitted for cordite’s renga)
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a woman knits
flowers
on a soldier’s grave
(ku submitted for cordite’s renga)
wordwhorse 
tender care in this poem.
Eight words…and so powerful! You said so much with so little…beautifully done.
Powerful. A poignant statement of love. Beautiful. I love it even as it tears me apart.
beautiful. Just love your articulation and expressions. So much said in few words.
Powerful imagery in so few words. Great.
Short, but so poignant.
Simple, direct and haunting!
Beautifully heart gripping.
Thank you so much everyone for your kind words. I’m really delighted that you’ve enjoyed reading it.
heart rendering. It’s like a single tear, it speaks volume!
Tangable connection to beloved memories-
The first line made me think of “Tale of Two Cities” and then came the rest of the poem to wash Dickens out of my mind.
This is indeed a sad Farewell.
beautiful
Thanks for your feedback today!
really heart touching !