thunder at twilight
rolls down the day dragging the
damp sky to the ground
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thunder at twilight
rolls down the day dragging the
damp sky to the ground
wordwhorse 
wow! lovely!
This give me a shiver to read. You made it all come alive!
Enduro–
I loved the slide of this…! As Pam had twilight glide us upstream, yours has twilight sliding us down, liked greased lightning…
Fun!
This is the exact rough and tumble I imagine!
Wow! I love this…it feels!
love this reverberation.
..interesting antithesis at play..many thanks..
I really like this haiku– it is powerful, simple, but layered.
deathless – so good |||
I could just see the raindrops from the day settling on the ground at twilight time.