12.45 am
the rain falls
heavy
and sparse
2.45 am lightning
But that’s not what woke me.
You moved.
6.30 am is painful
after 5.30 am. Are we there yet?
how do you start
the new day
when yesterday is still
rawseared
within?
12.45 am
the rain falls
heavy
and sparse
2.45 am lightning
But that’s not what woke me.
You moved.
6.30 am is painful
after 5.30 am. Are we there yet?
how do you start
the new day
when yesterday is still
rawseared
within?
i like the structure you gave it with the time indicating the movment.