i am timetied
minute twisted
greedy for an hour
stolen from a random
day
(to be with you)
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i am timetied
minute twisted
greedy for an hour
stolen from a random
day
(to be with you)
wordwhorse 
lovely
A novel way to express high flying passion!
Timetied is a wonderful word. I enjoyed this. Thanks.
I love timetied! Aren’t we all?
minute twisted is a two-word song, just stunning.
For some reason the last line embedded in paragraphs is what made the poem for me — can someone explain that mystery 🙂 I am not a punctuation person, maybe it made the phrase into a whispered secret? maybe it made it look optional, please replace here with your own reasons for being timetied? Either way, it pleased me greatly!
“greedy for an hour” … now I can relate to this!
Love the inventive way you have with words, and the subject!
Thank you again everyone for your supportive feedback – it helps to keep me writing, and I’m very glad my work gives people pleasure. Haiku Tuna, you’ve nailed the way I like to write. Nonprescriptive, all interpretations and meanings optional. I have my own reasons for and meanings behind what I write, but I also like to leave the reader to lay my words on to themselves to make the poem their own. So, a whispered secret, optional for all – yes definately 🙂
🙂 this is really cute. timetied, minute twisted!
You had me stunbling in time with this delightful piece.
Nice work – the form fits perfectly the fleeting moments that are never enough, never.
Oh, this would be so great on a valentine!
It IS a great valentine! Thanks for this whimsical dance with time…very cool!
What a wonderful poem, so lilting! Thank you for sharing this.
now that kinda love is heavenly moments….
Nice your lines..greedy for an hour. I’ll remember that one.
super word choices
I like “time tied” and “greedy for an hour”